The sea
The flawless turquoise covers everything I can see. It's immeasurable color sparkles in the daylight. The sparkly and beautiful color is spellbinding holding me fast.
I attempt to dive into the freezing water but instead I belly-flop and choke on the fluid, YUCK! The saline of the sea disgusts me. I feel betrayed, but I just can't leave for some reason.
As I lie here I notice a gust of wind comes while the palm trees create it's little "Palm Tree Dance". It waves from one side to the other which increases and slows as the wind that comes and goes. The wind shapes the palm tree which lets it become a part of shade for both the sea and sand.
My eyes uncontrollably float up to the azure sky, it's like my eyes were locked in place. I can see the crescent moon but I can also see the sun going down … I look at my watch and I realize how late it is. It's time to go...
Kia ora Abid,
ReplyDeleteWow! What a fantastic piece of writing. I really like the imagery you have put into your writing. You have used interesting vocabulary to give the reader an understanding of where you are and how you felt.
I can see you also used paragraphs. I love it.
What are some of the tips you can offer so that other people can write like you?
Looking forward to your future blog post,
Miss Laxa