Friday, August 27, 2021

Concrete Poem - Star

Hello everyone, today I did a Concrete Poem! We learn't that to make a Concrete Poem you need to draw a certain shape or thing and then your poem needs to describe your shape/thing. After that you can either put your writing/poem in or on the lines of your shape/thing.  I made my poem about a star. Hope you like my poem and please give me some feedback. See you next time! 



If you can't red my poem it says: "Bright star, shining in the sky. Starlight seen way up high. I wish I could fly so I could touch a star. And maybe just maybe keep it as mine." Bye.
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  1. PetulaSeptember 1, 2021 at 3:57 PM

    Hi Abid,
    Excellent! I love that poem so much, do you mind if I use it. I was thinking of putting it up in our classroom (room 14).

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    1. AnonymousOctober 10, 2021 at 1:26 PM

      Thanks, It would be an great to be on your classroom wall
      -Abid

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  2. Helen TipeluSeptember 6, 2021 at 7:59 PM

    This is super cool. I love how it all relates to the star. I am sure you really have to think hard about how to make it all relate. It would be cool to cut it out, colour the other side and then hang above your bed and see it every night when you go to sleep. You could make a whole collection of stars.

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    1. AnonymousOctober 10, 2021 at 1:28 PM

      Thanks, It would be great to be on your classroom wall - Abid

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    2. AnonymousOctober 10, 2021 at 1:50 PM

      sorry I commented on yours in accident

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  3. MarleenSeptember 9, 2021 at 7:04 PM

    Hey Abid

    That’s a cool poem! I’ve never heard of a concrete poem before! Glad that I can add it to my knowledge!

    Couple of spelling mistakes to fix in your introduction but I thought it was informative. Any reason you chose a star for your shape?

    Keep it up!

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2021 at 5:20 AM

    Thank you for sharing this piece of creative writing and art. You show you have thought hard about your topic. Next time you may want to try using WordArt.com for your poem. This is a way to increase your digital knowledge and skills.

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  5. Ms Laxa @ NWSSeptember 14, 2021 at 7:09 PM

    Kia ora Abid,

    I really like how you explained what you did for the concrete poem. I read some interesting words - bright and shining. I wonder if you can use a thesaurus to find other interesting words?

    Looking forward to future blog psots,
    Miss Laxa

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